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Ally14 • Od: 6.12.2010 • Prispevkov: 94
book 20.10.2011 14:34
Tisti, ko znate dobro angleško... Rabim vašo pomoč. Bi lahko prosim pregledali to besedilo in kar je narobe popravili. Res je nujno.

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Ally14 • Od: 6.12.2010 • Prispevkov: 94
Re: book 20.10.2011 14:35
The plot of the book is about a young women. Alex is a thirty- year old art gallery assistant and she is in love with her boss, but he is not in love with her. Eventually she find out, that Brad is not the person, that she thought he is.
It?s usual day for Alex, she is again late to work, but when she come to a gallery, she see a lot of paparazzi in front of the gallery. Brad tells Alex that something strange happened that some paintings in the gallery are fake. It?s a scandal and the journalist want to ask some questions. Alex and Brad are escaping from the gallery and are going to the country side. Alex is very happy, that she can spend a few days alone with Brad. But in this three days, that they are spending in a country side, a lot of things happen. One of them is, that Brad tells Alex, that he will have to fire her. The next day Brad?s nephew come, because his mum and dad are having a problems. And this little boy Christopher, Brad?s nephew stay with them for the next two days. He is very afraid, because there is a storm outside, and Alex try to cheer him up with a story about earth children. Christopher love the story and Alex found out, that she could be a great writer. The next day, Christopher and Alex go to a supermarket to buy a christmas tree. In the store, they meet Barry, Alex boyfriend. He decide to go with them, but in the way they also meet Alex friend Diana, and they all decide to go to the Brad?s house. When they come home, there is Brad and together they decide to do a little christmas party. Meanwhile they are having a party, Christopher runs in and show them a picture that he did. There wouldn?t be any problem, if the picture had not be drawn by Brad before. Brad is angry about Christopher, and he sends everybody home. When Brad did that, Alex find out, what a selfish person is Brad. She found out that she is not even in love with Brad, because she didn?t really know him. She found that everything that she really want is Barry, her boyfriend.
I like this book, because it?s realistic and it?s a love story. It?s about blind love and when you end reading it, you really make wonder what a true love is.
Ally14 • Od: 6.12.2010 • Prispevkov: 94
Re: book 20.10.2011 17:49
prosim, če mi kdo pomaga ...

res je nujno ...

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Mrs.Sunshine • Od: 1.3.2010 • Prispevkov: 48
Re: book 20.10.2011 18:43
em za he/she/it se na koncu doda s npr. comes; sees; finds...
Pačupa • Od: 7.5.2010 • Prispevkov: 616
Re: book 20.10.2011 20:50
The plot of the book is about a young women. Alex is a thirty-year old art gallery assistant and she is in love with her boss, but he is not in love with her. Eventually she find out, that Brad is not the person, that she thought he is.
It's usual day for Alex, she is again late to work, but when she come to a gallery, she see a lot of paparazzi in front of it. Brad tells Alex that something strange happened that some paintings in the gallery are fake. It's a scandal and the journalists want to ask some questions. Alex and Brad are escaping from the gallery and are going to the country side. Alex is very happy, that she can spend a few days alone with Brad. But in this three days, that they are spending in a country side, a lot of things happen. One of them is, that Brad tells Alex, that he will have to fire her. The next day Brad's nephew comes, because his mum and dad are having some problems. So this little boy Christopher, Brad's nephew stay with them for the next two days. He is very afraid, because there is a storm outside, and Alex try to cheer him up with a story about earth children. Christopher love the story and Alex found out, that she could be a great writer. The next day, Christopher and Alex go to a supermarket to buy a christmas tree. In the store, they meet Barry. He is her boyfriend. He decides to go with them, but in the way they also meet Diana, a friend of Alex. They all decide to go to the Brad's house. When they come home, they find Brad there so they decide to do a little christmas party. Meanwhile they are having a party, Christopher runs in and show them a picture that he did. There wouldn't be any problem, if the picture had not be drawn by Brad before. Brad is angry about Christopher, and he sends everybody home. When Brad did that, Alex find out, what a selfish person Brad is. She found out that she couldn't be in love with Brad, because she haven't really know him. She founds that everything that she really want is Barry, her boyfriend.
I like this book, because it's realistic and because it's a love story. It's about blind love and when you read it, you really start to wonder what a true love is.

Ok, nekaj sem popravo, so neke malenkosti pa par besed oz. stavkov sem popravo, zamenjo. Upam, da bo vredu. Edino nebi blo bolše, če bi pisala v pretekliku?
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The truth may be out there, but lies are inside your head
Pačupa • Od: 7.5.2010 • Prispevkov: 616
Re: book 20.10.2011 21:14
Dalo mi se ji in sem še te napisal v pretekliku...

This book talks about a young women. Alex is a thirty- year old art gallery assistant and she is in love with her boss, but he is not in love with her. Eventually she finds out, that Brad is not the person, that she thought he is.
It was usual day for Alex, she was again late for work, but when she came to the gallery, she saw a lot of paparazzi in the front of the gallery. Brad told Alex that something strange happened. That some paintings in the gallery were fake. It was a scandal and the journalists wanted to ask some questions. Alex and Brad escaped from the gallery and went to the countryside. Alex was very happy, because she could spend a few days alone with Brad. But in three days time, that they were spending in a countryside, a lot of things happened. One of them was, that Brad have told Alex, that was going to fire her. The next day Brad's nephew arrived. He came because his mum and dad were having some problems. So Christopher as how he was called, stayed with them for the next two days. He was very afraid, because there was a storm outside, and Alex tried to cheer him up with a story about earth children. Christopher loved the story and Alex have found out, that she could be a great writer. The next day, Christopher and Alex went to a supermarket to buy a christmas tree. In the store, they meet Barry. He was Alex's boyfriend and decided to go with them. On the way they have also meet Alex's friend Diana, and they have all decided to go with them to the Brad's house. When they have come home, there was Brad and all together they have decided to throw a little christmas party. Meanwhile they were having a party, Christopher run in and showed them a picture that he made. There wouldn't be any problem, if the picture had not been drawn by Brad before. Brad was angry about Christopher, so he send everybody home. When Brad did that, Alex find out, what a selfish person Brad was. She founded out that she was not even in love with Brad, because she didn't really know him. She have found that everything that she really wants is Barry, her boyfriend.
I like this book, because it's realistic and because it's a love story. It's about blind love and when you read it, you really start to wonder what a true love is.
_________________
The truth may be out there, but lies are inside your head
Ally14 • Od: 6.12.2010 • Prispevkov: 94
Re: book 20.10.2011 21:23
najlepša hvala, ... Smile


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